Problems

Greystreak: *sits down in front of him, crying* d-dad, I...

Whitestar: *turns angrily* How you dare to hurt Swiftleaf like that?! You're going to be father, Greystreak!! She's your mate!!! What's happening to you?!

Greystreak: she's not my mate!!! My mate is Twilightfur!!!

Whitestar: T-twilightfur?... That Bloodclan's warrior?!

Greystreak: Yes, dad!! I love her more than anything in this world!! She's my life!... And what am I going to do now when Swiftleaf is saying what those kits are mine?! I didn't even touch her!! My kits live in the Bloodclan!!!

Whitestar: y-your kits?... Those kits who were with her in the last gathering?...

Greystreak: Yes, they are... And I can't be even more proud of them!!

Whitestar: but...everyone said what their father was other cat!

Greystreak: no, he's not!! We only want our kits to be happy in one clan!! Don't you understand?!!

Whitestar: g-greys-!

Greystreak: I wish mom was alive!! She would understand me! Not like you do!

Whitestar: son, I-I... *looks down*

Greystreak: Now Twilightfur hates me because she thinks what those kits are mine... When they are not!... I hate my life now what I'm not with her... *closing his eyes, crying a lot*

Whitestar: *sighs*... *walks over to him and sits down, fur by fur, licking him* don't worry... This will not end up like this...

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Part of an rp with marythekiller02 :3
This took me all day! QAQ
And It's my first time drawing a background xDD